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Dear Diary You may know my vocabulary is awful I also know my vocabulary is awful
To tell the truth I never finished the vocabulary books ever Through the high school and university too.
At that time I think I don't need additional vocabularies class maybe vocabulary followed naturally.
But I was wrong and I proved it myself.
I could pass the test or get some minimum score for the toice or OPIC without the vocabulary studying.
But recently I feel a huge gap in my language skill so I decide to study vocabulary.
So I searched my Bookshelf There's the two vocabulary books
One is totally new and the other is only chapter one is checked
I will finish the one vocabulary book in this month no today is the end of this month.
I will finish the one vocabulary books at next month until next month
It's gonna be my first time to finish vocabulary book.
Cheer me up dear my diary.

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문장별 첨삭 및 설명:

1. Dear Diary You may know my vocabulary is awful I also know my vocabulary is awful
🔴 Dear Diary, you probably already know—my vocabulary is awful. And yes, I know it too.

• 문장 나눠서 감정 강조,
• may know보다 probably already know가 자연스러움

2. To tell the truth I never finished the vocabulary books ever Through the high school and university too.
🔴 To be honest, I’ve never finished a vocabulary book—not in high school, not in university.

• To tell the truth도 괜찮지만 To be honest가 더 구어체
• 중복된 표현 줄이기 위해 간결하게

3. At that time I think I don't need additional vocabularies class maybe vocabulary followed naturally.
🔴 Back then, I thought I didn’t need extra vocabulary classes. I believed the words would come naturally.

• 시제 일치 (think → thought)
• vocabularies → vocabulary는 셀 수 없는 명사
• 표현 부드럽게 다듬기

4. But I was wrong and I proved it myself.
✅ 자연스럽고 간결해서 그대로 사용

5. I could pass the test or get some minimum score for the toice or OPIC without the vocabulary studying.
🔴 I managed to pass tests like TOEIC or OPIC with just the minimum score, even without studying vocabulary.

• toice → TOEIC
• 문장 부드럽게 다시 구성

6. But recently I feel a huge gap in my language skill so I decide to study vocabulary.
🔴 But recently, I’ve felt a huge gap in my language skills, so I decided to study vocabulary.

• 시제 일치 (feel → have felt, decide → decided)
• skills는 복수형이 더 자연스러움

7. So I searched my Bookshelf There's the two vocabulary books
🔴 So I looked through my bookshelf and found two vocabulary books.

• 문장 연결
• There's the two → 문법 오류 (There are two → 자연스러운 구조로 재작성)

8. One is totally new and the other is only chapter one is checked
🔴 One is completely new, and the other has only the first chapter checked off.

• totally new보다 completely new
• 표현 부드럽게 수정

9. I will finish the one vocabulary book in this month no today is the end of this month.
🔴 I planned to finish one book this month—but today is already the last day.

• 시간 흐름을 반영한 수정

10. I will finish the one vocabulary books at next month until next month
🔴 So now, I’ll finish it by the end of next month.

• at next month → by the end of next month가 자연스러움

11. It's gonna be my first time to finish vocabulary book.
🔴 It’ll be my first time ever finishing a vocabulary book.

• 감정 강조를 위한 ever 추가
• 관사 a 추가

12. Cheer me up dear my diary.
🔴 Cheer me on, dear diary.

• 응원 받는 표현은 cheer me on

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전:

Dear Diary,
You probably already know—my vocabulary is awful. And yes, I know it too.
To be honest, I’ve never finished a vocabulary book—not in high school, not in university.
Back then, I thought I didn’t need extra vocabulary classes. I believed the words would come naturally.
But I was wrong, and I proved it myself.
I managed to pass tests like TOEIC or OPIC with just the minimum score, even without studying vocabulary.
But recently, I’ve felt a huge gap in my language skills, so I decided to finally study vocabulary seriously.
I looked through my bookshelf and found two vocabulary books.
One is completely new, and the other has only the first chapter checked off.
I had planned to finish one of them this month—but today is already the last day.
So now, I’ll finish it by the end of next month.
It’ll be my first time ever finishing a vocabulary book.
Cheer me on, dear diary.

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