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Dear Diary,
Today is Friday. It's nothing special day.
Useally I go to boxing gym at Friday(not only Friday) but Friday is my second favorit boxing day. because Friday boxing class has no limitation.
But I decided not to go to boxing gym.
Because my class ticket is almost empty.
I have only two more class ticket in this month or I have to perchase another class for 6 month.
furturmore I had had a right shoulder injory a couple of years ago at that time I coudl't even hold the glass.
Recently my right shoulder had a slight pain.
So I decided to take a last today and this weekend. I won't do anything with shoulder.
Weekend was normaly swimming day but summer is too hot so I avoid went to out to swimming pool.
I do the kettlebell curkit training insted of go to the swimming.
but, I won't do any thing.
After work, I came home did some vocabujlary studing, cleaning the house and taking a shower.
Maybe, do I deserve to drink?
Actually while coming home I went to E-mart to buy some milk and I came back home.
I knoticed I didn't buy a milk. I've just brung two bottle of Yeowool what it is my favorite soju.

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문장별 첨삭 및 설명:

1. Today is Friday. It's nothing special day.
🔴 Today is Friday. Nothing special happened.

• It's nothing special day → 자연스럽게 "Nothing special happened"로 수정

2. Useally I go to boxing gym at Friday(not only Friday) but Friday is my second favorit boxing day. because Friday boxing class has no limitation.
🔴 I usually go to the boxing gym on Fridays (not only Fridays), but Friday is my second favorite boxing day because the class has no limits.

• Useally → Usually, favorit → favorite
• at Friday → on Fridays
• 문장 구조와 문법 정리

3. But I decided not to go to boxing gym.
🔴 But I decided not to go today.

4. Because my class ticket is almost empty.
🔴 My class pass is almost used up.

5. I have only two more class ticket in this month or I have to perchase another class for 6 month.
🔴 I only have two classes left this month—or I’ll have to buy another 6-month pass.

• perchase → purchase
• class ticket보다 pass, classes가 더 자연스러움

6. furturmore I had had a right shoulder injory a couple of years ago at that time I coudl't even hold the glass.
🔴 Also, I had a right shoulder injury a couple of years ago—back then, I couldn’t even hold a glass.

• furturmore → furthermore, injory → injury, coudl't → couldn’t

7. Recently my right shoulder had a slight pain.
🔴 Recently, my right shoulder started hurting again.

8. So I decided to take a last today and this weekend. I won't do anything with shoulder.
🔴 So I decided to rest today and over the weekend. I won’t do anything that strains my shoulder.

9. Weekend was normaly swimming day but summer is too hot so I avoid went to out to swimming poor.
🔴 Weekends are usually for swimming, but this summer is too hot, so I’ve been avoiding the pool.

• normaly → normally, poor → pool

10. I do the kettlebell curkit training insted of go to the swimming poor.
🔴 I’ve been doing kettlebell circuit training instead.

• curkit → circuit, insted → instead

11. but, I won't do any thing.
🔴 But this weekend, I won’t do anything.

12. After work, I came home did some vocabujlary studing, cleaning the house and taking a shower.
🔴 After work, I came home, did some vocabulary study, cleaned the house, and took a shower.

• vocabujlary studing → vocabulary study

13. Maybe, do I deserve to drink?
🔴 Maybe... do I deserve a drink?

• 강조를 살려 a drink로

14. Actually while coming home I went to E-mart to buy some milk and I came back home.
🔴 Actually, on the way home I went to E-mart to buy some milk.

15. I knoticed I didn't buy a milk. I've just brung two bottle of Yeowool what it is my favorite soju.
🔴 But when I got home, I realized I forgot the milk—I only brought back two bottles of Yeowool, my favorite soju.

• knoticed → noticed, brung → brought, a milk → milk

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전:

Dear Diary,
Today is Friday. Nothing special happened.
I usually go to the boxing gym on Fridays (not only Fridays), but Friday is my second favorite boxing day because the class has no limits.
But I decided not to go today.
My class pass is almost used up. I only have two classes left this month—or I’ll have to buy another 6-month pass.
Also, I had a right shoulder injury a couple of years ago—back then, I couldn’t even hold a glass.
Recently, my right shoulder started hurting again.
So I decided to rest today and over the weekend. I won’t do anything that strains my shoulder.
Weekends are usually for swimming, but this summer is too hot, so I’ve been avoiding the pool.
I’ve been doing kettlebell circuit training instead.
But this weekend, I won’t do anything.
After work, I came home, did some vocabulary study, cleaned the house, and took a shower.
Maybe... do I deserve a drink?
Actually, on the way home I went to E-mart to buy some milk.
But when I got home, I realized I forgot the milk—I only brought back two bottles of Yeowool, my favorite soju.