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"이 포스팅은 쿠팡 파트너스 활동의 일환으로, 이에 따른 일정액의 수수료를 제공받습니다."

쿠팡이 추천하는 골드박스 관련 혜택과 특가

 

 

Dear Diary,
I skiped write a dairy a couple of days.
I have a sleeping issue so I couldn't sleep well awhile so my body malfuncioned.
I fell a sleep after 5 a.m. and woke up 8 a.m from Saturday to Tuesday so I was baery awake during the day or evening.
It made me more sensestive so I was more eaily annoied everything. especially the office and specipic some one.
I'm worried about myself how long can I take it or can I calm down and get an inneroice?
I used to treat someone makes me annyoied like who has a mental handicaped person so who needed help.
But it looks it's never gonna end and this situation makes me tired and wanted to give up.
What should I do??

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🔧 문장별 교정 + 설명

🔴 I skiped write a dairy a couple of days.
→ I skipped writing a diary for a couple of days.

• skiped → skipped (철자 수정)
• write a dairy → writing a diary (동명사)
• dairy(유제품) → diary

🔴 I have a sleeping issue so I couldn't sleep well awhile so my body malfuncioned.
→ I have a sleeping problem, so I couldn’t sleep well for a while and my body malfunctioned.

• awhile는 ‘잠시 동안’이지만 여기선 for a while이 맞음
• malfuncioned → malfunctioned

🔴 I fell a sleep after 5 a.m. and woke up 8 a.m from Saturday to Tuesday so I was baery awake during the day or evening.
→ I fell asleep after 5 a.m. and woke up at 8 a.m. from Saturday to Tuesday, so I was barely awake during the day or evening.

• a sleep → asleep
• baery → barely

🔴 It made me more sensestive so I was more eaily annoied everything. especially the office and specipic some one.
→ It made me more sensitive, so I was more easily annoyed by everything—especially the office and certain people.

• sensestive → sensitive, eaily annoied → easily annoyed
• specipic some one → certain people

🔴 I'm worried about myself how long can I take it or can I calm down and get an inneroice?
→ I’m worried—how long can I take this? Can I calm down and find inner peace?

• inneroice → inner peace (의도 파악)

🔴 I used to treat someone makes me annyoied like who has a mental handicaped person so who needed help.
→ I used to treat people who annoyed me as if they were someone with a mental disability who needed help.

• annyioed → annoyed, handicaped → handicapped

🔴 But it looks it's never gonna end and this situation makes me tired and wanted to give up.
→ But it seems like it’s never going to end, and this situation makes me tired and want to give up.

• 시제 일치 (wanted → want)

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전

Dear Diary,
I skipped writing a diary for a couple of days.
I’ve been having sleeping problems, so I couldn’t sleep well for a while and my body started to malfunction.
From Saturday to Tuesday, I fell asleep after 5 a.m. and woke up at 8 a.m., so I was barely awake during the day or evening.
It made me more sensitive, and I found myself easily annoyed by everything—especially at the office and by certain people.
I’m worried—how long can I take this? Can I calm down and find inner peace?
I used to treat people who annoyed me as if they were someone with a mental disability who needed help.
But it feels like this is never going to end, and the situation makes me so tired that I want to give up.
What should I do??