영어일기 - HIKING - 20250816

 

 

 

Dear Diary,
I skipped you a few days. Because I had a meeting with friend and gym mates. So I couldn't write. Furthemore, there was nothing special happening. Just regullar everyday normal mxxxxx fxxx. Went to work, came home and did some excercise. Oh, I went to the Namhansanseong. I dislike hiking and mountain. But, my gymnate told me it's like a park. I watched the Movie Namhansanseong and that was a really good movie so I accepted his suggestion. But it was hiking. The meaning of Namhansanseong is The caslte over the Namhan-mountain. I like many kinds of activities but I there are a few thing I don't like. That is hiking, sleeping in the car, sleeping in the tent mountain climing something go wild I don't like it. The only allowed gone wild is the water. I want to go to free diving!!!!

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🔧 문장별 교정 + 설명

🔴 I skipped you a few days.
→ I skipped writing in you for a few days.

• diary에 직접 "skipped you"라고 하기는 어색 → skipped writing in you

🔴 Because I had a meeting with friend and gym mates.
→ Because I met up with a friend and my gym mates.

• meeting with friend → met up with a friend

🔴 Furthemore, there was nothing special happening.
→ Furthermore, nothing special happened.

• 시제 단순화

🔴 Just regullar everyday normal mxxxxx fxxx.
→ Just regular everyday normal stuff—same old routine.

• 원문 의도 살리되 욕설은 완화

🔴 Went to work, came home and did some excercise.
→ I went to work, came home, and exercised.

• 주어 생략보다는 추가하는 게 더 자연스러움

🔴 Oh, I went to the Namhansanseong.
→ Oh, and I went to Namhansanseong.

• 관사 제거 (the 필요 없음)

🔴 I dislike hiking and mountain.
→ I dislike hiking and mountains.

• mountain → 복수형

🔴 But, my gymnate told me it's like a park.
→ But my gym mate told me it was like a park.

• 시제 일치 (is → was)

🔴 I watched the Movie Namhansanseong and that was a really good movie so I accepted his suggestion.
→ I had watched the movie Namhansanseong before, and since it was really good, I accepted his suggestion.

• 영화 제목은 이탤릭체
• 시제 조정으로 자연스러움

🔴 The meaning of Namhansanseong is The caslte over the Namhan-mountain.
→ The meaning of Namhansanseong is “The Castle on Namhan Mountain.”

• caslte → castle
• 고유명사는 그대로 두되 깔끔하게 인용

🔴 I like many kinds of activities but I there are a few thing I don't like.
→ I like many kinds of activities, but there are a few things I don’t like.

• thing → 복수 things

🔴 That is hiking, sleeping in the car, sleeping in the tent mountain climing something go wild I don't like it.
→ Those are hiking, sleeping in the car, sleeping in a tent, mountain climbing—basically anything too wild. I just don’t like it.

• 나열 구조 정리

🔴 The only allowed gone wild is the water.
→ The only kind of “going wild” I allow is in the water.

• 문장 매끄럽게 수정

🔴 I want to go to free diving!!!!
→ I want to go freediving!!!!

• free diving → freediving (표준)

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전

**Dear Diary,
I skipped writing in you for a few days because I met up with a friend and my gym mates.
Also, nothing special really happened—just regular everyday routine.
Go to work, come home, do some exercise, repeat.

Oh, but I did go to Namhansanseong.
I usually dislike hiking and mountains, but my gym mate told me it was more like a park.
I had watched the movie Namhansanseong before, and since it was really good, I accepted his suggestion.
But in the end—it was hiking.
The meaning of Namhansanseong is “The Castle on Namhan Mountain.”

I enjoy many kinds of activities, but there are a few things I don’t like:
hiking, sleeping in the car, sleeping in a tent, mountain climbing—basically anything that feels too wild.
The only kind of “going wild” I accept is in the water.

I want to go freediving!!!!**