
Dear Diary,
Yesterday I slept easily but not too much. Even if I slept early, I couldn't wake up early. I'm not a early bird. Anyway, I went to 5 real estate agent offices and told to them my situation. everyone answer same nobody said other things. That was "That's too much." I've agreed with them. If I did't feel it too much, I will not go to their office so many time. I just wanted to make it sure.
So, I call to my hose owner and talked about it and she said "I will make a dicesion until tomorrow" Can I sleep well tonight? Maybe no. Should I drink? I dont WAN'T. Rearl? I don't know. Life goes on and on and on.
🔧 문장별 교정 + 설명
🔴 I'm not a early bird.
→ I’m not an early bird.
- 관사 a → an
🔴 I went to 5 real estate agent offices and told to them my situation.
→ I went to five real estate offices and told them my situation.
- 숫자는 글자로 five
- told to them → told them
🔴 everyone answer same nobody said other things.
→ Everyone gave me the same answer. Nobody said anything different.
- 문장 분리 + 문법 보완
🔴 That was "That's too much."
→ And that was, “That’s too much.”
- 문장 연결
🔴 If I did't feel it too much, I will not go to their office so many time.
→ If I didn’t feel the same, I wouldn’t have gone to their offices so many times.
- 시제 일치 (did't → didn’t, will not → wouldn’t have)
🔴 I just wanted to make it sure.
→ I just wanted to make sure.
- make it sure → make sure
🔴 So, I call to my hose owner and talked about it
→ So I called my house owner and talked about it
- call to → called
- hose owner → house owner
🔴 and she said "I will make a dicesion until tomorrow"
→ and she said, “I’ll make a decision by tomorrow.”
- dicesion → decision
- until tomorrow → by tomorrow
🔴 Can I sleep well tonight? Maybe no. Should I drink? I dont WAN'T. Rearl? I don't know.
→ Can I sleep well tonight? Maybe not. Should I drink? I don’t want to. Really? I don’t know.
- Maybe no → Maybe not
- WAN'T → want to
- Rearl? → Really?
🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전
**Dear Diary,
Yesterday I fell asleep easily, but not for long.
Even though I went to bed early, I couldn’t wake up early—I’m just not an early bird.
Anyway, I went to five real estate offices and explained my situation.
Everyone gave me the same answer: “That’s too much.”
And I agreed with them.
If I hadn’t felt the same way, I wouldn’t have gone to so many offices—I just wanted to make sure.
So I called my house owner and talked about it.
She said, “I’ll make a decision by tomorrow.”
Can I sleep well tonight? Maybe not.
Should I drink? I don’t want to.
Really? …I don’t know.
Life just goes on and on and on.**
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