Vesti la Giubba (Pagliacci)

 

 

 

Dear Diary,
My miserable life is always same so I haven't writed anyting for awire.
But I just want to share some good music ""Vesti la giubba" from 'Pagliacci' - 테너 박정환 | 성악도서관"
This song is my favorite opera aria.
My favoriet version is perfomed by Placido Domingo but Korean opera singer also has a really good perfomered so I just wnat to shared that.
Just that it.

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🔧 문장별 교정 + 설명

🔴 My miserable life is always same so I haven't writed anyting for awire.
→ My miserable life is always the same, so I haven’t written anything for a while.

• is always same → is always the same
• writed → written (과거분사)
• anyting → anything
• awire → a while

🔴 But I just want to share some good music ""Vesti la giubba" from 'Pagliacci' - 테너 박정환 | 성악도서관"
→ But I just want to share some good music: “Vesti la giubba” from Pagliacci (sung by tenor Park Jeong-hwan at the Vocal Library).

• 큰따옴표 정리
• 작품명 이탤릭체
• 한국어 이름은 괄호 안에서 설명식으로 유지

🔴 This song is my favorite opera aria.
→ 그대로 OK

🔴 My favoriet version is perfomed by Placido Domingo but Korean opera singer also has a really good perfomered so I just wnat to shared that.
→ My favorite version is performed by Plácido Domingo, but the Korean opera singer also gave a really good performance, so I just wanted to share that.

• favoriet → favorite
• perfomed → performed
• perfomered → performance
• wnat → want
• 시제 일치: wanted to share

🔴 Just that it.
→ That’s it.

• 어색한 표현 → 간단히 고침

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전

Dear Diary,
My miserable life is always the same, so I haven’t written anything for a while.
But today, I just want to share some good music: “Vesti la giubba” from Pagliacci (sung by tenor Park Jeong-hwan at the Vocal Library).
This aria is my favorite in all of opera.
My favorite version is performed by Plácido Domingo, but the Korean singer also gave a really wonderful performance, so I wanted to share it here.
That’s it.