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Dear Diary,
My life is still in the circle. Realestimate problem is not solved. If I can't find a new home owner, I lost money and house. So I keep my house clean and freash fpr the guest who want to buy this house. But, there was only one guest coming and others canceled. And also my shoulder still hurt. So I bareryl do some work out. It's a emotionaly and phiscally tired days. Hope theses are gone soon.

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🔧 문장별 교정 + 설명

🔴 My life is still in the circle.
→ My life is still going in circles.

• 더 자연스러운 관용 표현: “going in circles”

🔴 Realestimate problem is not solved.
→ The real estate problem is still not solved.

• Realestimate → real estate

🔴 If I can't find a new home owner, I lost money and house.
→ If I can’t find a new homeowner, I’ll lose both money and my house.

• 시제 일치 (lost → will lose)
• home owner → homeowner

🔴 So I keep my house clean and freash fpr the guest who want to buy this house.
→ So I keep my house clean and fresh for any guests who might want to buy it.

• freash → fresh, fpr → for
• 문장 자연스럽게 조정

🔴 But, there was only one guest coming and others canceled.
→ But only one guest actually came; the others canceled.

• 문장 간결하게

🔴 And also my shoulder still hurt.
→ And my shoulder still hurts.

• 시제 일치 (hurt → hurts)

🔴 So I bareryl do some work out.
→ So I can barely work out.

• bareryl → barely, work out → 동사형으로 쓰는 게 자연스러움

🔴 It's a emotionaly and phiscally tired days.
→ These days have been emotionally and physically exhausting.

• a emotionaly and phiscally tired days → 표현 어색 → emotionally and physically exhausting

🔴 Hope theses are gone soon.
→ I hope these problems go away soon.

• theses → these
• 의미를 분명히 전달

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🌿 자연스러운 전체 버전

**Dear Diary,
My life still feels like it’s going in circles.
The real estate problem is still not solved.
If I can’t find a new homeowner, I’ll lose both money and my house.
So I keep my house clean and fresh for any guests who might want to buy it.
But only one guest actually came, and the others canceled.

On top of that, my shoulder still hurts, so I can barely work out.
These days have been both emotionally and physically exhausting.
I just hope these problems go away soon.**